Comments on: Now releasing Regenis 4 Chronicles Book 2 – The Invisible Foe by Steve Simons http://www.podiobooks.com/blog/2010/02/03/now-releasing-regenis-4-chronicles-book-2-the-invisible-foe-by-steve-simons/ News from the Staff of Podiobooks.com Mon, 13 Feb 2012 18:26:24 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3 By: Steve Simons http://www.podiobooks.com/blog/2010/02/03/now-releasing-regenis-4-chronicles-book-2-the-invisible-foe-by-steve-simons/comment-page-1/#comment-330610 Steve Simons Mon, 26 Sep 2011 18:49:37 +0000 http://www.podiobooks.com/blog/?p=2043#comment-330610 Hi Chris, Many thanks for your honest feedback, I am most delighted that you have found my other books better edited, thought out and organised. Yep you are probably right about the false charges of misconduct, I wasn't aiming at developing the characters, merely putting the lead character in a very awkward place to see how he and those around him copes. In retrospect I could have worked on that far more and gained a lot more from it, so I take your critique fairly on the chin and hope to learn from the experience. No I didn't take your comments as too harsh and certainly not unwarranted, it is refreshing to get good constructive criticsm and I thank you for it. I am still learning the craft and am glad to have such positive and encouraging feedback. Thanks ...SteveS Hi Chris,

Many thanks for your honest feedback, I am most delighted that you have found my other books better edited, thought out and organised.

Yep you are probably right about the false charges of misconduct, I wasn’t aiming at developing the characters, merely putting the lead character in a very awkward place to see how he and those around him copes. In retrospect I could have worked on that far more and gained a lot more from it, so I take your critique fairly on the chin and hope to learn from the experience.

No I didn’t take your comments as too harsh and certainly not unwarranted, it is refreshing to get good constructive criticsm and I thank you for it. I am still learning the craft and am glad to have such positive and encouraging feedback. Thanks
…SteveS

]]> By: Chris http://www.podiobooks.com/blog/2010/02/03/now-releasing-regenis-4-chronicles-book-2-the-invisible-foe-by-steve-simons/comment-page-1/#comment-319461 Chris Thu, 29 Apr 2010 06:42:25 +0000 http://www.podiobooks.com/blog/?p=2043#comment-319461 Well I made it through the whole book which is saying something. I felt that this was a bit more rushed and less thought out, edited, and organized than the authors other books. The dialog could use some work and a large thread in the story (the sexual misconduct charges) that didn't seem to develop the characters or have much bearing on the core of the story. I though that it could have just as easily been removed without having any affect. I look forward to what the author releases next and hope he doesn't feel my comments are too harsh or unwarranted. Well I made it through the whole book which is saying something. I felt that this was a bit more rushed and less thought out, edited, and organized than the authors other books.

The dialog could use some work and a large thread in the story (the sexual misconduct charges) that didn’t seem to develop the characters or have much bearing on the core of the story. I though that it could have just as easily been removed without having any affect.

I look forward to what the author releases next and hope he doesn’t feel my comments are too harsh or unwarranted.

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