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	<title>Comments on: War Machine</title>
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		<title>By: Dan</title>
		<link>http://www.podiobooks.com/blog/2008/10/31/war-machine/comment-page-1/#comment-317069</link>
		<dc:creator>Dan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 27 Sep 2009 18:30:11 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>While Andy may be a good author, he is also the king of PodFade. He has left us hanging with two unfinished books. If you like to finsih the stroy (like I do), subscribing to this book is probably not for you.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>While Andy may be a good author, he is also the king of PodFade. He has left us hanging with two unfinished books. If you like to finsih the stroy (like I do), subscribing to this book is probably not for you.</p>
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		<title>By: RelayeR</title>
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		<dc:creator>RelayeR</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 28 Jun 2009 01:59:29 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Andy, your prose is top-notch and the action in both your audiobooks is believable and intense...but...

I have to agree with the previous posters who were not quite happy with the constant music and your speed of reading.

Maybe if you pretend you are reading your story as commentary that goes along with a movie of your story.

a one second break at commas, colons and semi-colons, 2 seconds break at a period and 5 seconds break at paragraph-ends is about perfect</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Andy, your prose is top-notch and the action in both your audiobooks is believable and intense&#8230;but&#8230;</p>
<p>I have to agree with the previous posters who were not quite happy with the constant music and your speed of reading.</p>
<p>Maybe if you pretend you are reading your story as commentary that goes along with a movie of your story.</p>
<p>a one second break at commas, colons and semi-colons, 2 seconds break at a period and 5 seconds break at paragraph-ends is about perfect</p>
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		<title>By: Phil Manchester UK</title>
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		<dc:creator>Phil Manchester UK</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 20 Jun 2009 14:43:36 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Andy, great book true hardcore UK writing. When will you be posting more episodes?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Andy, great book true hardcore UK writing. When will you be posting more episodes?</p>
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		<title>By: Mr Fahrenheit</title>
		<link>http://www.podiobooks.com/blog/2008/10/31/war-machine/comment-page-1/#comment-288412</link>
		<dc:creator>Mr Fahrenheit</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 29 Apr 2009 21:43:06 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I&#039;m enjoying the book. 

Only a few episodes in though I have to agree with Baxter I&#039;m afraid, the music is really distracting and makes me want to turn it off.

The oration is fine, the only thing which springs to mind on that score is slow down a little.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m enjoying the book. </p>
<p>Only a few episodes in though I have to agree with Baxter I&#8217;m afraid, the music is really distracting and makes me want to turn it off.</p>
<p>The oration is fine, the only thing which springs to mind on that score is slow down a little.</p>
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		<title>By: swoon</title>
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		<dc:creator>swoon</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 12 Apr 2009 22:49:22 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>your book is the best and I love love love your reading, thats why podiobooks is so f@#king great.  
thank you</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>your book is the best and I love love love your reading, thats why podiobooks is so f@#king great.<br />
thank you</p>
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		<title>By: Thomas in Korea</title>
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		<dc:creator>Thomas in Korea</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 08 Mar 2009 16:42:39 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I&#039;m a hardcore military sci-fi fan.  Because I travel a lot, I like to wait until the book is finished to listen.   

Any feedback on the story quality?  The plot sounds great!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m a hardcore military sci-fi fan.  Because I travel a lot, I like to wait until the book is finished to listen.   </p>
<p>Any feedback on the story quality?  The plot sounds great!</p>
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		<title>By: pallidsoul</title>
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		<dc:creator>pallidsoul</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 10 Jan 2009 20:44:44 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I actually enjoy the music in the podcast, it makes it more dramatic in my opinion and adds nice flavor.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I actually enjoy the music in the podcast, it makes it more dramatic in my opinion and adds nice flavor.</p>
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		<title>By: Andy Remic</title>
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		<dc:creator>Andy Remic</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 25 Nov 2008 20:19:12 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>OK, thanks for the feedback. I&#039;m the first to admit I am not the best orator in the world, but I give it a good shot :-)

And I&#039;ve been considering dropping the backing music; anybody else have an opinion on this??</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>OK, thanks for the feedback. I&#8217;m the first to admit I am not the best orator in the world, but I give it a good shot <img src='http://www.podiobooks.com/blog/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':-)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
<p>And I&#8217;ve been considering dropping the backing music; anybody else have an opinion on this??</p>
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		<title>By: Baxter</title>
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		<dc:creator>Baxter</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 25 Nov 2008 15:37:28 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Interesting start.

I&#039;d like to recommend:
Different &quot;voices&quot; for different characters. It gets a little hard to follow when there is no inflection or tone difference when different characters are speaking.

Also I would cut the music to beginning, end and chapter changes. It gets a little distracting.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Interesting start.</p>
<p>I&#8217;d like to recommend:<br />
Different &#8220;voices&#8221; for different characters. It gets a little hard to follow when there is no inflection or tone difference when different characters are speaking.</p>
<p>Also I would cut the music to beginning, end and chapter changes. It gets a little distracting.</p>
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