Legon Awakening
Please welcome Nicholas Taylor to the site. His new fantasy tale is Legon Awakening, and no, that’s not a typo. I know how to spell “legion”:
Set in a world that is not our own, Legon Awakening takes you through an epic journey into a land full of imagination and innovation.
Join Legon and his sister, Sasha, search to understand their true heritage, confused at the possibility that of being part human and part elf. Surrounded by elves, the newly introduced Iumenta race, Dragons and Humans; Legon and Sasha’s lives are filled with adventure and fantasy on their search for answers as they begin an epic journey of discovery; not to mention the incredible battle scenes which will be surely to capture your imagination!
May 6th, 2008 at 8:40 am
Great Story, very engaging. A nice voice helps the treatment of the story. Why is there no hard back version? With a good editor this could really go somewhere.
May 7th, 2008 at 6:32 am
Interesting story. Nice premise. Production values are pretty good. Speed it up a bit. You have a good voice that can handle the diction nicely and if read too slow, the story seems halting. Keep up the good work.
May 9th, 2008 at 4:32 pm
Great story with just the right amount of suspense. Narrator has an excellent voice with good enunciation and clarity. Maintains the right speed to allow imagery to form in the mind. Really waiting for more.
May 9th, 2008 at 8:01 pm
I love this book. Great story with all the right elements. Can’t wait for more episodes.
May 15th, 2008 at 7:52 pm
Great podio, is it me or does the beginning resemble the nativity story, king Harod and all. I think the pace of reading is quite right, gives the imagination time to catch up. Give me more dude.
May 28th, 2008 at 8:08 pm
There seems to be a disconnect between episode 8 and 9. Things are talked abotu that have not happened.
June 2nd, 2008 at 7:40 pm
Hey Everyone,
Sorry but when I uploaded chapter 9 I used the wrong content. I’m really sorry for the mix up, if you got the wrong chapter please just delete the one that you have and re-download 9 and the right content will be there. Thank you for your patience.
Nick
June 23rd, 2008 at 6:26 pm
The book is very entertaining and I am really enjoying it. Keep it up, please. Also, thanks for the heads up regarding Chapter 9.
June 29th, 2008 at 4:09 pm
One of the many things I really like about this story is that the main characters are encumbered with personal issues. Sasha has seizures, Keither is socially awkward, and so on. This makes the characters far more enjoyable for me. Keep up the good work.
August 13th, 2008 at 4:37 am
I have truly enjoyed this book. The storyline is compelling and the action is just right; the development of characters is great. Keep up the good work!
August 13th, 2008 at 5:11 pm
I have been enjoying the story very much, but the reading speed is a bit slow. I find it dragging the story down and taking something from the action of the main story. Love the character development, details, etc, but please read a bit faster. Look to Phillippa Ballantine or Tee Morris for good examples of an author reading their work.
August 25th, 2008 at 6:45 am
I love this story. Great ideas on magic use, I might steal some of your ideas if I ever start writing my 3000 page novel ;). Great work.
August 29th, 2008 at 7:29 am
I’m really enjoying the story. I see I am not the only one who feels the speed is a bit slow. When you read a characters part, the speed is great, but when you speak as the narrator it drags the story down. Thanks for a good story all the same.